DVD Commentary meme

I don't know that I really have enough material for this, or if there's any interest, but I've enjoyed reading these as they've shown up on my flist, so!

First five comments, one per person: pick a one-shot or a single chapter from one of my multi-chapter fics and I will do a commentary on it, DVD style, or a meta on that fic if doing it DVD style is too cumbersome. If you post this to your journal, revise as you wish (number of comments, style of commentary, etc.).

My fic is mostly archived over at the_towers, although I've never posted Seven Days there. I guess I should confess that I wrote this on the original kinkmeme thread, too. ^_^; Though I think a lot of people had already guessed, judging by the comments.

Like spacehussy posted, if you just have a question about anything, I'll be glad to answer it rather than post an entire commentary. In that case, I wouldn't count it as one of the five. Whatever you prefer. :3

DVD Commentary meme - "A Thousand Times Over"

onetruesikorsky asked for commentary on A Thousand Times Over.

( My commentary in bold. )