I loved the delicious smuttiness of it, of course, but I also loved the way you slipped the little things I LOVE about those characters into such a short piece. Wonka chiding Charlie for swearing was a lovely touch! And that ending line -- so sweet!
*still smiling*
(And I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to it . . . I loved it the first time I read it, of course, but I wasn't really feeling capable of replying to it then. Sometimes words simply fail me.)
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oh, I ALWAYS want smut!
Date: 2006-08-30 06:03 am (UTC)I loved the delicious smuttiness of it, of course, but I also loved the way you slipped the little things I LOVE about those characters into such a short piece. Wonka chiding Charlie for swearing was a lovely touch! And that ending line -- so sweet!
*still smiling*
(And I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to it . . . I loved it the first time I read it, of course, but I wasn't really feeling capable of replying to it then. Sometimes words simply fail me.)